π₯π [ROAST] My Landing Page & Idea to Make It Better π πππ₯
Hey guys,
πββοΈ I'm Adam, and I'm building π Remote Together at the moment, a community for people who live & work remotely to support each other.
Personally I found working remotely is very challenging, and these days because of the π¦ coronavirus pandemic, a lot of people are forced to work from home in a blink of an eye. π
πββοΈ I've been working remotely for more than half a year now, there were and still are many challenges I face.
π I shared my story and motivation behind why I built it, you can find them and more about Remote Together here:
ππ https://remotetogether.life/
π Hope the information above and on the landing page would make sense.
π Any opinions, advices or criticism is very welcomed! You can comment down below or find out how to reach me on the site!
And make sure to sign up for early access! π
I'm on my phone so the feedback applies to the mobile version of the site. This is also the first first time I visit it!
So, in no particular order:
- not much color contrast -> looks a bit bland
- justified text is hard to read and results is lines that only have 2 words
- the text is huge
- the text size of the blog posts (I think that's what they are?) is bigger than the text in the hero section. What's the priority here?
- "your remote companion" looks more like 3 tags than an actual phrase
- "what remote together is" and "what remote together brings you" (arguably the most important posts) are on the bottom of the page. Maybe visitors won't even see themβ¦
Hope I don't sound too harsh! This was my honest first impression! Best of luck~
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