What would you change about my landing page?

Hey 👋🏽

I posted recently about being anxious to release anything and the feedback I got gave me a lot of encouragement to just put it out there and see what happens. So in light of that, can I get some feedback on my landing page please.

I would like to release something by the end of May, hopefully I'm not too far off!

Thanks!

Looks great! I like that it's simple and to the point. If you could make the buy button stand out a little more (the text colour particularly is too light to me) I think that'd improve it.

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Thomas Christopher Author

I've updated the button styles now. Hopefully an improvement 🙂

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I agree with Keenen but I would make the buy button a more appealing color. Not just white. Make it stand out between the demo. People need to buy.

Maybe try to create some kind of 7 day trial?

Put the demo button next to the buy button BUY / TRY (buy button must be another color)

Make the second headline bigger.

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Andrew C

Some feedback:

  • I felt the "Checkout securely with Gumroad." added unnecessary clutter.
  • It would be nicer if I could play your video demo on the landing page itself, rather than through a dialog popup.
  • A social proof section would be nice. This could be positive user feedback, or perhaps companies that are using your product, or positive reviews
  • Perhaps consider a features section. This would give you a chance to explain why you created the application, why existing solutions were lacking, or perhaps showcase some of the function or non-functional attributes of your software.

You may also find this landing page guide helpful.

Hope that helps!

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Kai

It's simple and I immediately get what it is. So that part is good.

My objection is:

  • Why do I need this, when I have websites testing this for free?
  • What's your USP?

Is it just that I don't have open a new tab, google, wait for it to load and test? Maybe that's still relevant for those, who for some reason have to test their speed a lot or are changing places often. But that wouldn't be me.

Good luck!

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Really like that it is simple and to the point :)

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