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Hi Makerloggers, Shakil here and am working on a new landing page for my Mobile App.

I made a Blank landing page and removed all images, logo and distraction and focusing on the quality of Copy for my landing page. It's true that the picture says a thousand word but that's a separate experiment in itself.

This is an experiment to help improve my landing page copy.

I am looking for your help with the following question related to the landing page:

-Can you understand what the landing pages message is?

-Which part of the landing page did you like?

-Which part was a letdown or confusing to you?

-What the one thing that you would change if you can in the copy?

And finally, the landing page is www.tradeplan.co

And finally, the email part work for feel free to sign up if you're interested ;-)

Thanks a lot for your help