Roast my landing page

Hey ML,

I'm Himanshu, and I'm building Hoverify. For product hunt launch I redid the landing page and would appreciate your feedback - tryhoverify.com.

Thanks :)

Carl Poppa πŸ›Έ

It's well thought out and beautifully done. I have a feeling you'll do really well. All the best for the PH launch!

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Himanshu Mishra Author

Thanks dude :)

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Nic N

You have clear CTA's, great copy, its responsive and looks awesome. As a product designer this looks like a really awesome product I could definitely see being really helpful :) . I would say the only things are the top 'buy' button works, but the one next to play video does not and maybe adding some narration / nice voice to the video could be helpful even though the features are listed below. Boom roasted. >_<

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Himanshu Mishra Author

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Anna

Design looks good but there are small grammatical errors all over the page. The most important one (because it's in the hero section) is "Web designing." That's… not what people call it.

The correct way to say it is either "web design" or (if you want it to be a verb) "designing for the web "

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Himanshu Mishra Author

Thank's anna for bringing that to attention, I would have almost overlooked it.

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evan_harris

The shadowing effect that is applied when hovering the mouse over the embedded videos is nice, but it felt weird to me that the entire video was not clickable. Having to specifically click on the middle button to pause a video feels challenging.

When revisiting the page, the video loads and blocks the content immediately below it.

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Himanshu Mishra Author

You got it, dude. Made the whole video clickable.

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