Give me some honest feedback on my landing page
I've recently launched a landing page and I'd like some brutally honest feedback please.
Congrats on the launch of the landing page! Huge fan of the simplicity and the focus is on the messaging, awesome job. Couple bits of feedback:
- Change the format of 'easy' - the blue and underline makes it look like a hyperlink but it's not.
- Change the colour of the request beta access button as it's the same as the beta login button - recommend a green/red to make it stand out (and add a bit more padding to the top)
- Find out more doesn't work… when I click on it I assume it should scroll down?
- Add a favicon… pet peeve of mine 😂
Hope that helps!
All the best, @gadgick
I agree to most of the critique, except the red button. Blue is fine in eastern culture, link to technology, green is linked to positivism, nature, etc … (so definitely something you want to engage a customer or give them positive feedback) but don't use red 😄
Also, as a possible user, reading your landing page I ask myself where's the trap. If it's free, I am the product right? So … maybe be a little bit more clear about the business model or the motivation.
I'm not a huge fan of your headline. "Make money while you sleep" - sounds a bit like these get rich quickly scams. I would probably focus more on the creators and how you help them.
I like the idea of helping creators when they start by charging nothing, but maybe you could explain some scenarios on your site. When do you start to charge? The moment you make a sale over 19$ or the next month? What happens if you sell something for 20$ and nothing in the next month etc.
Hey @scholz, thanks for the feeback. You literally can make money while you sleep though and I think that is a huge draw to start selling digital assets.
The free until you make $19 is basically because I won't be offering a free trial because I think they suck but I also won't be offering a free plan. I am giving people the opportunity to make their first months charge before they have to pay, essentially letting them have as long as they need to sign up and test it out and make some sales.
I'll try get that across better in my copy.
Need more image. I like the simplicity Need fav icon/meta tag og try to make the footer text shorter and align
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