Edited first draft using Hemingway, Grammarly and Plagarism Checker
First time using "professional" writing tools to edit my paid writing gig. Learned that:
- My sentences are too long and hard to read. Use more periods more often.
- I use too many adjectives. Most are filler words that don't add much.
- I use words that appear less convincing, eg "just", "i think". As the Hemingway app says, "Be bold, don't hedge."
- My sentences are too long and hard to read. Use more periods more often.
- I use too many adjectives. Most are filler words that don't add much.
- I use words that appear less convincing, eg "just", "i think". As the Hemingway app says, "Be bold, don't hedge."