Day 298 - [Feedback wanted] Lifelog's pitch page https://golifelog.com/posts/feedback-wanted-lifelogs-pitch-page-1635131320850
I’m writing out a “Learn more” page for Lifelog. It’s kind of like a pitch deck, but in one web page. The aim is to share in detail Lifelog’s unique proposition, and increase conversion.
I want to build this in public, especially with the Lifelog community here. So guys, would love some feedback on the first iteration of the copy below.
Does it resonate with you?
Is that an accurate depiction of your writing experience here?
What works, what doesn’t work so well?
What can be improved?
What’s missing?
I want to build this in public, especially with the Lifelog community here. So guys, would love some feedback on the first iteration of the copy below.
Does it resonate with you?
Is that an accurate depiction of your writing experience here?
What works, what doesn’t work so well?
What can be improved?
What’s missing?