Mark Hoad

The only difference between ordinary and extraordinary is just that little "extra".

Made huge amounts of progress on new landing page

Micah Iverson

Other than the top section, the rest of them feel very cramped together. Add some verticaly spacing between sections and elements.

Your second section has a lot of text, can you cut this length in half?

Third section, "All for just $40! That's just $3.33 Per Beer", I'd change that verbiage. It comes off as being a bit "car salesman". Plus $40 could be a lot of money for some people.

The 4th section with the pinkish overlay on the image feels really odd to me, might look better as a dark grey overlay instead.

Your section titles don't seem consistent in color or font-weight, double check.

You may consider only showing 3 "locations" rather than 6, and double gutter width.

Lastly, bottom right panel, add left/right padding to match the top and bottom padding.

Great start!

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